Oh my God. *blink* *rereads* Okay, Feedback. That was utterly perfectly in character. I'm new to the fandom, and have pretty much only been fully onboard for a month, but I'm up to date on episodes and just ran the marathon of watching again this week. What you've written here is one of the best characterizations of Rodney I've ever read, which is all the more impressive for the utter lack of words. Seriously. You're, like, a rock star.
Con crit. Well, I'd like to say that the ending is rather abrupt, but honestly I think it's more a stylistic choice on your part than a problem. I think it's actually a very effective ending. *rereads again* Okay, every time I read it, I just... it just stops. And I get ready to be disappointed, but the end just makes me think more about what was already presented. So. Lack of con crit, I guess.
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Date: 2006-09-30 05:12 am (UTC)Con crit. Well, I'd like to say that the ending is rather abrupt, but honestly I think it's more a stylistic choice on your part than a problem. I think it's actually a very effective ending. *rereads again* Okay, every time I read it, I just... it just stops. And I get ready to be disappointed, but the end just makes me think more about what was already presented. So. Lack of con crit, I guess.
Beautiful story. Thanks for sharing. :)